M.I.A. by Beffy

M.I.A.

Beffy

5 February 2018 at 16:46:09 MST

A research team has been dispatched to an unexplored planet to document its flora and fauna, but something lurks in the shadows...

My very first commission! Quite a long piece, but it was great fun to write and I really got my teeth stuck into it. Hope you enjoy!

Commission for rawkus_rocksteady over on FA

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Literary / Story

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    Well that was an unsatisfying ending, but then you meant it to be, didn't you...didn't you!

    Humor aside it was a very good read, kept me intrigued all the way through. I have to commend you on the gutsy ending as well. Not too often that gets pulled off as well as you did.

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      Thank you very much! I do like me a cliffhanger, I have to admit